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Videogames assessment: Learner response

Videogames assessment: Learner response 1) Copy and paste your feedback into your blog in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential). WWW: This is a satisfactory response with your first main paragraph in particular offering real insight into the question. Clear focus on genre and The Sims franchise. However, it isn’t sustained or matched by the Tomb Raider paragraph in order to award a band 4/5 mark. EBI: Ideally you would want to write more than this for a 25-mark essay but I think this was partly my fault for the time I gave you for the assessment and the online nature of it. If you can write at this level and sustain it across perhaps three well-developed paragraphs then you will be looking at a top grade in future PPEs/assessments. 2) Read the  mark scheme for this assessment  carefully - in particular the indicative or suggested content. Identify  three  specific points that you could have made in your response. Use of the science